Kimberley feedback:
1. Paper structure
The structure of the paper has some problems, the draft is like the conclusion of the topic. So I need a restructure.
2. This topic is a proposal for the society, which can be written in the way of proposal. Question：How jewelry making be considered therapeutic tool for childhood trauma?
3. research ‘The theory of flow’ will be helpful for paper.
4. The case study needs more; the artist's reference can be added according to the situation.
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