「Research Paper」Draft Paper&Tutorial with Kimberly
- siyipu
- 2019年10月4日
- 讀畢需時 1 分鐘
Kimberley feedback:
1. Paper structure
The structure of the paper has some problems, the draft is like the conclusion of the topic. So I need a restructure.
2. This topic is a proposal for the society, which can be written in the way of proposal. Question:How jewelry making be considered therapeutic tool for childhood trauma?
3. research ‘The theory of flow’ will be helpful for paper.
4. The case study needs more; the artist's reference can be added according to the situation.





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